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四级作文平时积累(3)

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四级作文平时积累(3)

Directions:
Write a composition entitled Is It Necessary to Attend Training Classes? You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.以下是某城市各类培训班的数目图,请简要描述图表;
2.给出可能的原因;
3.你的观点。


【步骤构思】
步骤1:
审题:这是一篇以培训班为主题的解释型说图表作文。

步骤2:
引入话题:对图表进行简单描述;
展开话题:从三方面分析原因;
话题结论:提出自己的观点,在必要参加培训班。

【作文背诵范文】
Is It Necessary to Attend Training Classes

According to the graph, great changes have taken place in the number of training classes in the past twenty years. On the one hand, in the last century, the increase of the training classes was not so great. On the other hand, there has been a sharp increase in the training classes after 2000.
根据该图表,在过去的二十多年里,培训班的数量发生了很大的变化。一方面,在上世纪,培训班的增长没有那么大。另一方面, 2000年以后培训班一直在急剧增长。

There are three reasons for the change. Firstly, with the development of the society, more and more people pay much attention to the improvement of their ability, and they hope to improve through special training classes. Secondly, to most people, training plays a direct part in he1ping them to attain their goal quickly and efficiently. Thirdly, with the improvement of the people's living standards, more and more people regard it as a preferable way to spend their spare time.
发生这种变化有三个原因。首先,随着社会的发展,越来越多的人非常注重自身能力的提高,他们希望通过特殊的训练课程来提高自己。其次,对大多数人来说,在帮助他们快速、高效地实现目标方面,培训起着直接的作用。第三,随着人民生活水平的提高,越来越多的人把它作为一种更可取的方式来度过他们的业余时间。

As for me, I think it is necessary to attend training classes. For one thing,they can play a very important role in help you to attain your goal quickly and efficiently. For another, you can learn not only what you need quickly but also a new way to broaden your horizon.(185 words)
对于我来说,我认为有必要参加培训班。一方面,在帮助你快速高效地实现自己的目标上它们可以发挥非常重要的作用。另一方面,你不仅可以快速地学习你所需要的东西,还可以学到新的方法来开拓你的视野。

【高分句型解析】
According to the graph, great changes have taken place in the number of training classes in the past twenty years.根据该图表,在过去的二十多年里,培训班的数量发生了很大的变化。

点评:这是一个现在完成时态的句子,great changes taken place表示这些巨大的变化是在过去的二十多年里已经发生的事实。
 
【作文加分词】
attain  [ə'tein]     v.达到,到达
preferable  ['prefrəbl]     adj.较好的,较合宜的
the people's living standards    人民的生活水平
broaden your horizon    开拓你的视野


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