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四级作文平时积累(11)

2015-01-14    来源:网络    【      托福雅思口语高分过

四级作文平时积累(11)

Directions:
Write a composition entitled Traveling. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.旅游已成为一种重要的休闲方式;
2.旅游受到欢迎的原因;
3.旅游的好处。

【步骤构思】
步骤1:这是一篇以旅游为主题的议论文。
步骤2:
引入话题:概述旅游业迅速发展的情况;
展开话题:详述旅游受欢迎的几方面的原因;
话题结论:总结说明旅游的好处。

【作文背诵范文】
Traveling

As you travel, you will see beautiful sceneries typical of the region. Besides, you can meet and make friends with people of different colors and races. Today people are so fond of traveling that tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in most countries.
在旅途中,你可以欣赏到典型的当地美景。此外,还能遇见和结交不同肤色、不同种族的新朋友。如今人们是如此地酷爱旅行,旅游业已成为大部分国家发展最快的产业之一。

The main reason why people travel is, perhaps, for pleasure. For one example, having worked hard throughout the weekdays, people will find a wild trip to the nearby mountains a real relaxation. For another example, spending an annual holiday abroad is an especially satisfying experience for those who do not have the opportunity to be away from their homelands. When people return from their travel, they will generally feel fresh and energetic
人们旅游的主要原因也许是为了娱乐。比如,连续辛苦工作了好些日子,人们会发现到附近的山区露营是一次真正的放松。再举个例子,利用年假出国旅游对于那些从来没有机会离开家乡的人而言,是一件极其令人满意的经历。人们度假归来后,通常会感到容光焕发、充满力量。

Taveling is also one of the best means for learning. In my opinion, the knowledge acquired from travel, as you will find in your life, is more valuable than that from any influential reference book.
旅游也是学习的一种最佳途径。我认为,在旅途中获得的知识,正如在生活中所学到的一样,比在任何一本巨著中学到的都更宝贵。

In conclusion, for many people traveling enjoys top priority among various entertainment activities. You will be more confident of your life and work if you travel from time to time. (183 words)
总而言之,对于许多人而言,旅游是各种娱乐活动的首选。如果你时常旅游,你就会对自己的生活和工作更加自信。

【高分句型解析】
In my opinion, the knowledge acquired from travel, as you will find in your life, is more valuable than that from any influential reference book.
我认为,在旅途中获得的知识,正如在生活中所学到的一样,比在任何一本巨著中学到的都更宝贵。

点评:这是一个非限制性定语从句,as引导的非限制性定语从句作that knowledge的定语,起补充说明的作用。
 
【作文加分词】
relaxation  [,ri:læk'seiʃn]     n.放松,缓和
energetic  [,enər'dʒetik]     adj.精力充沛的
acquire  [ə'kwaiər]    v.获得,取得
inf1uential  [,influ'enʃl]     adj.有影响的
reference book     参考书
enjoy top priority      享有优先权
be confident of      对……有信心
 



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