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Directions:
Write a composition entitled How to Deal with Depression. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.近年来患抑郁症的人越来越多;
2.抑郁症的危害;
3.如何摆脱抑郁症。

【步骤构思】
步骤1:
审题:这是一篇以抑郁症为主题的解释说明文。

步骤2:
引入话题:简述患抑郁症的人越来越多这一现象;
展开话题:从学习、工作、生活方面阐述抑郁症的危害;
话题结论:提出摆脱抑郁症的两点建议。

【作文背诵范文】
How to Deal with Depression

In recent years, with the increasingly fierce competition, more and more people are bearing great pressure from study, work and life. Under great pressure, many people begin to become sad, hopeless and finally suffer from depression.
近年来,随着竞争的日趋激烈,越来越多的人正承受来自于学习、工作和生活的巨大压力。许多人在巨大的压力下开始变得悲伤、绝望,最终患上抑郁症。

Depression has brought great bad influence on one's study, work and life. In fact, depression affects not only one's mind but also his body. Those with severe depression even are unable to continue their work or carry out normal activities. The symptoms mainly include feelings of sadness, hopelessness, not wanting food and trouble sleeping. Besides, depression is linked to many other diseases, like heart disease. What's worse, depression is one ofthe main courses of people's suicide.
抑郁症给一个人的学习、工作和生活带来了严重的不良影响。事实上,抑郁症不仅影响一个人的心理,而且还影响到他的身体。那些患有严重抑郁症的人甚至无法继续工作或从事正常的活动。其症状主要包括悲伤、绝望的情绪,以及食欲差和失眠。此外,抑郁症与其他许多疾病有牵连,例如心脏病。更糟的是,抑郁症是有些人自杀的主要原因之一。

Considering the bad effects of depression, it must be taken more seriously. For those patients with depression, first of all, it is important to accept treatment timely instead of covering or ignoring the disease. Besides, people should learn to release pressure and keep a pleasant mood. ActuaUy, the best treatment is a combination of medication and psychological help. Only in this way can people reduce the chance of suffering from depression or get rid of it. (189 words)
鉴于抑郁症的不良影响,必须加以认真对待。对于那些抑郁症患者而言,首先,重要的是要及时接受治疗,而不是遮盖或忽视这种疾病。此外,人们应该学会释放压力,保持愉快的心情。其实,最好的治疗是将药物治疗与心理帮助相结合。只有这样,才能够减少患抑郁症的可能性或摆脱抑郁症的困扰。

【高分句型解析】
Under great pressure, many people begin to become sad, hopeless and finally suffer from depression.
许多人在巨大的压力下开始变得悲伤、绝望,最终患上抑郁症。

点评:这短短的一句话,层次却非常分明,逐级递进。例如"begin to become… and finally…"这样的句子也会为写作增色不少。
 
【作文加分词】
depression  [di'preʃn]     n.沮丧,消沉
Symptom  ['simptəm]     n 症状,征兆
suicide  ['si:isaid]     n.自杀
take more seriously      严肃对待
release pressure       释放压力
keep a pleasant mood      保持快乐的心情
combination  [,ka:mbi'neiʃn]     n.结合
psychological  [,saikə'la:dʒikl]     n.心理的,精神的



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