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2015-03-25    来源:网络    【      托福雅思口语高分过

备战2015四级作文篇(16)

Directions:
Write a composition entitled How to Eliminate Noise Pollution. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.噪音污染问题已成为社会关注的焦点;
2.怎样解决噪音污染问题;
3.作出总结。

【步骤构思】
步骤1:
审题:这是一篇以噪音污染为主题的解释说明论文。

步骤2:
引入话题:简述噪音污染已成为一个严重的社会问题;
展开话题:从三方面阐述解决噪音污染的办法;
话题结论:只有同心协力,才能解决噪音污染问题。

【作文背诵范文】

How to Eliminate Noise Pollution

Nowadays, along with the fast pace of urban development, noise pollution has largely disturbed the normal life of city dwellers. It has becomes such a serious problem that it has aroused the concern from the whole society.
现如今,伴随着城市快速发展的步伐,噪音污染对城市居民的正常生活干扰很大。噪音污染成了一个如此严重的问题,所以引起了整个社会的关注。

To put an end to such a serious problem, in my mind, calls for the efforts from all sides. First of all, major factories, as main noise creators, should be moved to industrial zones in suburbs. Department stores and big restaurants should not to be established too close to residential quarters. Moreover, the municipal government should increase the ratio of green land in the city, which can reduce all kinds of noises significantly. Last but not least, all urban constructions should be stopped during the night so as not to disturb the neighboring dwellers.
依我看来,要解决这一严重的问题,需要各方的努力。第一,大型工厂作为主要噪音制造者,应该搬到郊外的工业区。百货商店和大型餐厅不应该建得离居民区太近。另外,市政府应该提高城市土地的绿化率,这能很大程度上减少各种噪音。最后但同样重要的是,在夜间,所有的城市建设都应该停止,以防打扰周围的居民。

How can anybody expect to lead a meaningful life until he is far from noise pollution? Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating noise pollution at all levels can we expect to have a better environment and a more beautiful future.(176 words)
如果人们不远离噪音污染,如何期望能在一个意义的人生?只有当我们所有人都加入到消除各种噪音污染的努力中,我们才能期望有一个更好的环境,和更美好的未来。

【高分句型解析】

…all urban constructions should be stopped during the night so as not to disturb the neighboring dwellers. ……在夜间,所有的城市建设都应该停止,以防打扰周围的居民。

点评:这是一个结果状语从句,由so as to这一表结果的不定式短语引导,这一句型有时可以和so that和so…that引导的结果状语从句转换。例如在本句可以这样转换:all urban constructions should be stopped during the night so that they cannot disturb the neighboring dwellers。
 
【作文加分词】
the fast pace of urban development      城市快速发展的步伐
residential   [,rezi'denʃl]      adj.居住的,住宅的
municipal   [mju:niipl]      adj.市政的
dweller   ['dwelər]     n.居民
increase the ratio of      增加……的比率
put an end      结束



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