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备战2015四级作文篇(39)

Directions:
Write a composition entitled The Role of Migrant Workers. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chiness.
1.农民工对城市建设所做的贡献;
2.农民工涌入城市这一现象引发的问题;
3.你的观点。

【步骤构思】
步骤1:
审题:这是一篇以农民工为主题的议论文。

步骤2:
引入话题:指出农民工为城市的繁荣做出的贡献;
展开话题:农民工涌入城市所带来的问题;
话题结论:指出自己的观点,要正确对待农民工问题。

【作文背诵范文】
The Role of Migrant Workers

As is known to all, migrant workers have made great contributions to the prosperity of cities. They are an indispensable part of our workforce. There is no doubt that many construction projects would be lack of manpower without them. In addition, a large number of migrant workers stimulate the consumption of food and daily items. All these are positive aspects of migrant workers in cities.
众所周知,农民工对城市的繁荣做出了巨大的贡献。他们是劳动大军中不可或缺的一部分。毫无疑问,如果没有他们,许多建设项目都将缺少男性劳动力。此外,大批的农民工也剌激了食品和日常用品的消费。这些都是城市中的农民工积极的作用。

However, as a popular saying goes, "Everything has two sides". The same is the case with migrant workers. First, they have trouble getting their children into child care centers and schools because they are unregistered residents in the city. Second, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. Being not well-educated and incompetent, they are a potential threat to the peace and stability of the society.
然而,常言道:凡事都有两面。农民工问题亦是如此。首先,他们很难将子女送到托儿所或学校,因为他们没有城市户口。其次,大部分的农民工涌入大都市仅仅是为了挣钱。他们受教育水平低,能力欠缺,对社会的和平与稳定是一个潜在的威胁。

In my opinion, in the appraisal of migrant workers, it is one-sided to affirm everything or to negate everything. We should appreciate the great contribution made by them, and at the same time pay enough attention to the problems caused by them.(178 words)
我认为在评价农民工时,全盘肯定或全盘否定都是片面的。我们应感激他们所做出的巨大贡献,与此同时,也应对他们所引起的问题给予足够的重视。

【高分句型解析】
However, as a popular saying goes, "Everything has two sides". 然而,常言道:凡事都有两面。
点评:这句话中活用了习语"Everything has two sides",在写作中能正确运用这样的习语,也是写作的一个加分点。

Second, most of the migrant workers swarm into big cities just to make money. 其次,大部分的农民工涌入大都市仅仅是为了挣钱。
点评:这句话中活用了一个动词"swarm",好像蜂拥一样,使得文章栩栩如生。

【作文加分词】
migrant worker    农民工,外来工
prosperity  [pra:'sperəti]     n.繁荣
indispensable  [,indi'spensəbl]    adj.不可或缺的
unregistered  [ʌn'rədʒistəd]    adj.未注册的,未登记的
swarm into    涌入
incompetent [in'ka:mpitənt]    adj.无能力的
stability  [stə'biləti]    稳定
in the appraisal of…    在评价……方面
one-sided  [,wʌn'saidid]    adj.单方面的,片面的



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