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备战2015四级作文篇(47)

Directions:
Write a composition entitled Should Car's Fad Be Curbed. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.随着人们生活水平的提高,车价的降低,城市人群中出现了购车热;
2.但汽车带来的问题有目共睹;
3.是否应该控制购车热? 谈谈你的看法和理由。

【步骤构思】
步骤1:
审题:这是一篇以购车热为主题的议论文。

步骤2:
引入话题:提出观点,购车热是不切实际的;
展开话题:从三个方面分析汽车带来的问题;
话题结论:提出自己的建议,发展公共交通事业。

【作文背诵范文】
Should Car's Fad Be Curbed

With the economic growth, improvement of people's standard of living, together with the lowering price of cars, there appears cars' fad in big cities. Although cars, as a symbol of great prosperity, make our life convenient, it is not practical for Chinese to get crazy on private cars.
随着经济的增长,人民生活水平的提高,以及汽车价格的下降,在大城市出现了"购车热" 。虽然汽车作为一种繁荣的象征,给我们的生活提供方便,但中国人对私家车的狂热是不实际的。

The serious social problems brought by cars should not be overlooked.  The pollution caused by autos is the most important problem at present. The booming of the gas produces a large amount of poisonous gas, which destroys the ozone layer that protects us from the harmful rays. As a result, urban people tend to gave more odd cities suffer from traffic congestion. The traffic accident is another serious problem caused by cars. Statistics indicate that thousands upon thousands of people are killed or injured every year, and the number is on the rise. Moreover,  more cars mean less space. This can only build up the pressure of large population and limited space.
由汽车所带来的严重社会问题不容忽视。由汽车造成的污染是目前最重要的问题。汽油的燃烧会产生大量的有毒气体,这些有毒气体会破坏保护我们免受有害射线伤害的臭氧层。因此,城市的人们往往使更多的城市遭受塞车之苦。交通事故是由汽车造成的另一个严重问题。统计表明,成千上万的人每年都在交通事故中死亡或受伤,而且数量仍在上升。此外,更多的车意味着更少的空间。这只能增加人口和有限空间的压力。

Considering the above factors, I think private cars' fad should be curbed in big cities now. As a populous country, China should develop clean, convenient and fast public transmutations. (189 words)
考虑上述因素,我认为现在应在大城市遏制私家车的热潮。作为一个人口大国,中国应该大力发展清洁、方便、快捷的公共交通。

【高分句型解析】
Although cars, as a symbol of great prosperity, make our life convenient, it is not practical for Chinese to get crazy on private cars. 虽然汽车作为一种繁荣的象征,给我们的生活提供方便,但中国人对私家车的狂热是不实际的。

点评:这句话中“as a symbol of great prosperity”是作插入语,修饰前面的cars。
 
【作文加分词】
people's standard of living    人民的生活水平
prosperity  [pra:'sperəti]     n.繁荣,昌盛
overlook  [,ouvər'luk]     v.忽略,忽视
poisonous gas    有毒气体
build up    增强
populous  ['pa:pjələs]    adj.人口多的



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