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2015-05-28    来源:网络    【      托福雅思口语高分过

Directions:
Write a composition entitled My View on Job-Hopping. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.有些人喜欢始终从事一种工作,因为……

2.有些人喜欢经常更换工作,因为……

3.我的看法。


【步骤构思】
步骤1
审题:这是一篇以跳槽为主题的议论文。

步骤2
引入话题:描写喜欢固定在一个工作上的现象及原因;
展开话题:描述相反的观点:有人认为改变意味着进步;
话题结论:阐明自己的立场,要具体情况具体分析。

【作文背诵范文】
My View on Job-Hopping

Many people are inclined to do one job in their lives. In their opinions, people who change their jobs frequently are superficial and tactless. They believe that the only way to success is to stick to one job, because constant practice in a  professional field helps make an expert.
许多人倾向于一生只从事一项工作。在他们看来,那些频繁换工作的人很肤浅,不明智。他们相信,成功的唯一方式就是固定在一个工作上,因为在专业领域的持续工作能帮助你成为专家。

But there are still many people who don't agree. They argue that change means progress. If you are not satisfied with your present job or you have some better opportunities, of course you have the right to replace it with a more challenging and better paid one. Every change is a step to further success. This idea may be the reason why they change their jobs so offer.
但是也有人不同意这种观点。他们争辩说改变意味着进步。如果你对当前的工作不满意,或者你有一些更好的机会,当然你就有权利用更有挑战而且薪水更高的工作来换掉它。每一个改变都是向成功迈进了一步。这种想法也许是他们如此频繁换工作的原因。

For my part, I think it reasonable to change your job if you have a better opportunity. But once you have found a position where you can fully display your ability, it is advisable to settle down to it and put all your efforts into it. Only in this way, can you get the true joy of achieving your goal and improving your capability. (181 words)
依我看来,我认为如果你有更好的机会,那么你有理由换工作。但是一旦你已找到能充分发挥你能力的职位,安下心来,并把你所有的努力用在上面,才是可取的。只有通过这种方式,你才能在实现目标和提升能力上得到真正的快乐。

【高分句型解析】
Every change is a step to further success. 每一个改变都是向成功迈进了一步。

点评:这句话短小精悍,富有哲理,其实生活中大家都要善于改变,接受新事物。

Only in this way, can you get the true joy of achieving your goal and improving your capability. 只有通过这种方式,你才能在实现目标和提升能力上得到真正的快乐。 

点评:这是一个倒装句,副词only置于句首,强调方式状语、主语要进行部分倒装。

【作文加分词】
be inclined to     倾向于

stick to     遵守,坚持;保留

frequently  ['fri:kwəntli]     adv.频繁地,常常

professional field     专业领域

superficial  [,su:pər'fiʃl]    adj.肤浅的;表面的

be (not) satisfied with     ……()满意

tactless  ['tæktləs]     adj.不明智的,不得体的

challenging  ['tʃælindʒiŋ]    adj.有挑战性的

settle down    安定下来



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