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2015-05-29    来源:网络    【      托福雅思口语高分过

Directions:
Write a composition entitled To Be a Small Fish in a Big Pond or a Big Fish in a Small Pond. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese.
1.在大企业工作的特点;

2.在小企业工作的特点;

3.我的看法。


【步骤构思】
步骤1
审题:这是一篇以工作为主题的解释说明文。

步骤2
引入话题:要做大公司的下级还是小公司的主管;
展开话题:分析各自在大企业和小企业工作的优势;
话题结论:提出自己的观点,在小企业有更大的发展空间。

【作文背诵范文】
To Be a Small Fish in a Big Pond or a Big Fish in a Small Pond

There are differences between working as a subordinate in a large enterprise and presiding in a small firm, just as there are distinct differences be between being a small fish in a big pond and a big fish in a small pond.
在一家大企业中做下级与在一家小公司当主管,这之间有很大差别,就像大池子里的小鱼和小池子里的大鱼差别很明显一样。

With the former, you can derive a deep sense of satisfaction from being a member of a well-known organization such as IBM or Unilever.  You have the opportunities of learning from chief experienced executives and knowing about the standard working process.
如果是前者,作为知名机构中的成员,如国际商用机器公司(IBM) 或联合利华(Unilever),你能获得很强烈的满足感。你有机会从有经验的首席执行官身上学习,并且了解标准的工作流程。

With the latter, you have greater responsibilities and your decision may bring immediate effect. Normally you are exposed to various experiences and expected to do a great many things without much help or guidance.
如果是后者,你有更大的责任,而且你的决定可以马上生效。通常,你会处在各种经历的影响下,并且有可能在没有多少帮助或监督下做大量的事情。

Personally I prefer to work in a small enterprise, where I am more likely to be promoted. To be frank, I'd rather become a well-known and important figure within my own small pond than swim as an unknown and small shrimp in a big golden pond.(162 words)
依我个人看来,我习惯在小企业工作,在那里我更有可能得到晋升。坦白地说,我宁愿在我自己的小池子里成为出名的重要人物,而不是成为一个在大的金色池塘游来游去的不知名的小虾米。

【高分句型解析】
I'd rather become a well-known and important figure within my own small pond than swim as an unknown and small shrimp in a big golden pond. 我宁愿在我自己的小池子里成为出名的重要人物,而不是成为一个在大的金色池塘游来游去的不知名的小虾米。


点评:这句话运用了比喻的手法,"a well-known and important figure"“an unknown and small shrimp"两相对照,"small pond""big golden pond"形成鲜明对比,使得文章栩栩如生。

【作文加分词】
subordinate  [sə'bɔ: rdinət]     n.下属

executive  [ig'zekjətiv]    n.执行者,经理主管

preside  [pri'zaid]     v.主持,主管人员

distinct  [di'stiŋkt]     adj 截然不同的,明显的

immediate effect     即时效应

derive  [di'raiv]    v.得自,起源

expect to do sth.    期望做某事

to be frank    坦白说



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