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2016-02-03    来源:网络    【      托福雅思口语高分过

Topic 6 University Club
1.最近几年大学生社团如雨后春笋般涌现
2.学生对是否要参与学生社团意见不一
3.你的看法


University Club

Recently,many kinds of student clubs spring out m university campuses. Take Beijing Normal University as
An example,the past two years has witnessed a sharp increase in the kind of clubs from 28 to an astonishing number of 120,ranging from football club to speech club, from debate society to movie association.

When it comes to the topic whether it is a good or bad thing to take part in the club ,different students hold different
Views. Some students think that club is a good opportunity to develop their compre-hensive abilities,especially when they
can he leaders. While others believe disadvantages outweigh advantages, since it will take students much time that should be spent on study,especially for those who immerse themselves in more than one club.

As far as I am concerned, the best way is to make sure our own interest and fight for a balance between club activities and study.(155词)

【“一句话”点评】
很显然,第一段的两个数据抓住了阅卷老师的眼球。同时使用了witness ,  sharp , take ... as an example等好词和短语,同时,ranging分词做伴随状语,增加了亮点。

【快捷构思】
第一段:描述现象,引人该段中心“大学学生社团如雨后春笋般涌现”。而后“一句话”数例为具体现象展示,举出例子更加形象地说明大学学生社团越来越多。

第二段:以模板句提出该段中心“学生对是否要参与学生社团意见不一”,接着列出了两种不同的意见:a good opportunity to develop their comprehensive ability和take students much time that should be spent on study o

第三段:直接展现自己的观点,并提出简要的一个原因,不做更深层次的展开。

【好词好句】
(1)develop their comprehensive ability发展综合能力

(2)disadvantages outweigh advantages缺点大于优点

(3)take much time花费很多时间

(4)immerse oneself in专心/埋头于……(还可以表达为be immersed in )

(5)fight for a balance between两者之间保持平衡



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