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2014-02-25    来源:网络    【      托福雅思口语高分过

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)随着人们生活水平的提高,一些人认为节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了

2)但是很多人反对这种说法

3)你的看法是…,为什么?

Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?

【行文思路】
本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点,提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点,提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点,由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。

根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:提出第1种观点:节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了,并说明理由;提出第2种观点:节俭和朴素仍然是一种美德,并说明理由;表明“我”对节俭的看法,并说明理由。

【高分范文】
Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?

With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style [2]and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style.

[3]However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesn’t mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited [2]and some of them even are [4]on the decline. [5]Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well.

[6]As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe [7] “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is [8]not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. [5]In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. [5]Besides, there are still millions of Chinese [9]living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. [5]Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.

【亮点点评】
[1]“不再”。

[2]表示递进。

[3]引出另外一种观点。

[4]“在下降”。

[5]过渡衔接词语,使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

[6]用于引出自己的观点或选择。

[7]引用谚语“俭以防匮”。

[8]not... but连接并列结构,意为“不是…而是”。

[9]现在分词短语作后置定语。

[10]“毫无疑问”。

【佳句临摹】
1.佳句:Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline.

临摹:车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失,甚至还夺走了无数人的生命。

2.佳句:The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.

临摹:我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力,而应该相信一句谚语:“有志者,事竟成。”

【KEY】
1. Traffic accidents have caused great damages to people’s properties and even taken away thousands of people’s lives.

2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: “Where there is a will, there is a way.”



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