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专业八级改错模拟题-2

2016-02-25    来源:网络    【      托福雅思口语高分过
Planning is a very important activity in our lives. Itcan give 
pleasure, even excitement, and it can cause quitesevere headaches. __1__ 
The most significant the task ahead, the more carefulthe planning __2__ 
required. Getting to school or to work on time is a taskrequiring few __3__ 
or no planning, it is almost routine. A month’s touring holiday abroad, 
or better still, getting married, is a different matter altogether. If the 
matter involve a church wedding, a reception, a honeymoon in Venice, __4__ 
and returning a new home, this requires even more planning to make __5__ 
sure that it is successful. Planning is our way of trying to ensure success 
and of avoiding costly failures we can not suffer. It is equally essential __6__ 
to individual nations and families; the scale may be vary, but the degree __7__ 
of importance does not. In the essence, a nation planning its resources __8__ 
and needs do not differ from the familiar weekly shopping or monthly __9__ 
household budget. Both are designed to ensure an adequate supply of 
essentials, and if improperly carried out, will avoid shortages, wastage __10__ 
and over-expenditure.
 
参考答案及解析: 
1 将and 改为 or 
or表示“或者”,因为前后是两种截然不同的可能性,所以应该用or。 
2 将most改为 more 
3 将few改为little 
4 将involve 改为 involves 
因为主语 the matter 为单数,例如: 
Although planning involves material investment, even more important is theinvestment in man. 
虽然作机会应该包括物资投资,但最重要的是对人的投资。 
5 在returning后加介词to 
6 将suffer改为afford 
7 去掉be。 
vary是动词,可与助动词或者情态动词构成谓语,也可以独立构成谓语,例如: 
The weather varies from hour to hour in some mountain districts. 
8 去掉the 
in essence 是固定习语,意为“本质上,实质的" 
9 将do改为 does 
主语是动名词复合结构 a nation planning its resources and needs, 应视为单数,例如: 
Looking after children requires patience. 
10 将improperly改为 properly. 


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