六级长难句分析5

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2014-4-10 14:31

The practice that can help you past your learned bad habits of trying to edit as you write is what Elbow calls "free writing."

主干:The practice...is what...
定语从句that can...修饰主语The practice,从句中的介词短语 past your...habits作宾语you的补语,as you write引导的时间状语从句修饰trying to edite。what引导的表语从句中用了“call+宾语+补语“的结构,what是宾语,free writing是补语。
译文:这种可以帮助你克服在写作的同时就试图编辑的坏习惯的做法便是Elbow所称作的“自由式“写作。

As we have seen, the focus of medical care in our society has been shifting from curing disease to preventing disease-especially in terms of changing our many unhealthy behaviors, such as poor eating habits, smoking, and failure to exercise.


主干:the focus has been shifting
1. 句首As引导非限制性定语从句,As指代主句所说的内容,在从句中作seen的宾语。

2. 主句中破折号后的内容是短语介词in terms of引导的介词短语作状语,表示“从......方面来说“,changing与前面的shifting构成语义再现。
译文:正如我们所看到的一样,我们社会医疗的重心正在从治疗疾病转到预防疾病上来---特别是要改变我们许多不健康的行为,比如说不良的饮食习惯、抽烟、忽视锻炼。